From another thread:
"I suspect the challenge of repeatedly providing the kind of storylines we would like to see is harder than it seems. Doing it once or even four times isn't so hard, but repeating that dozens of times a year? The first few come easy, but it gets harder and harder..."
"I'm pretty certain I could write erotic intros a whole lot better that what we're getting from a MAJORITY of companies in the girl/girl video business today!"
Sure you can - once or a few times. Repeatedly, dozens and hundreds of times? Color me skeptical.
THE CHALLENGE FOR WRITERLY LLV MEMBERS
PART ONE: Write 12 one-paragraph storyline descriptions that are all unique and different from each other. Heck, I'll be impressed if anyone can create just six.
PART TWO: Add to each "the pitch" for each scene - the line that one girl delivers to initiate sexual contact. Typical examples - these are among Anon's favorites - include, "I noticed you looking at me," and "Have you ever had sex with a another girl?"
The Prize: The everlasting respect and admiration of your fellow LLV forum members. The potential for fame and fortune writing scripts for pornographers.
Fashion magazine editor Magdalene hires young Shyla for a tryout period as her second assistant. Maggie had informed the girl the job would require "extra after-hour duties," to which Shyla responded that "I'll do anything" to get this position. At the end of the first day Maggie informs Shyla that it's time for some of those "extra duties," removing her blouse as she speaks. She sits and orders the girl to stand behind and massage her shoulders. Maggie moans at the touch, and after a moment slips the bra straps off her shoulders, telling the girl to reach around the front and down.* When Shyla hesitates Maggie reminds her, "You did say you'd do anything, didn't you?" Shyla sighs and reaches down to cup Maggie's breasts...
To prove my point about how much harder it is to produce multiple erotic setups vs. just one, this recycles a device I've posted here before, the first time involving a TV news exec and a young reporter angling for a weekend anchor slot!
*FYI, this is what I mean by "the pitch."
And the tagline, or slugline, if you prefer, for all of these would be:Dominant predatory lesbians strike fear in the hearts - and lust in the loins - of pretty, innocent (school)girls!Really, dude, these are all the same storyline, with only the characters and locations changed. The dialog in scene #6 seems a bit inverted. Is the bartender - who would be really hot as the unashamed and confident femme in the room - supposed to be taking the question about bathing the younger girl as a seduction invitation? Who is inviting whom?
Really, dude, these are all the same storyline, with only the characters and locations changed
Yep....all of them have been used before in one form or another.
And they all seem contrived and corny and porny.