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Posted 9/8/2014 9:05 AM


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From another thread:

 "I suspect the challenge of repeatedly providing the kind of storylines we would like to see is harder than it seems. Doing it once or even four times isn't so hard, but repeating that dozens of times a year? The first few come easy, but it gets harder and harder..."

Anon responded:

 "I'm pretty certain I could write erotic intros a whole lot better that what we're getting from a MAJORITY of companies in the girl/girl video business today!"

Sure you can - once or a few times. Repeatedly, dozens and hundreds of times? Color me skeptical.

 

THE CHALLENGE FOR WRITERLY LLV MEMBERS

 

PART ONE: Write 12 one-paragraph storyline descriptions that are all unique and different from each other. Heck, I'll be impressed if anyone can create just six.

 

PART TWO: Add to each "the pitch" for each scene - the line that one girl delivers to initiate sexual contact. Typical examples - these are among Anon's favorites - include, "I noticed you looking at me," and "Have you ever had sex with a another girl?"

 

The Prize: The everlasting respect and admiration of your fellow LLV forum members. The potential for fame and fortune writing scripts for pornographers.

 

 

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Posted 9/8/2014 10:36 AM


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Perhaps you could get the ball rolling with an example? Just so everyone is clear.
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Posted 9/8/2014 10:57 AM


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Fashion magazine editor Magdalene hires young Shyla for a tryout period as her second assistant. Maggie had informed the girl the job would require "extra after-hour duties," to which Shyla responded that "I'll do anything" to get this position. At the end of the first day Maggie informs Shyla that it's time for some of those "extra duties," removing her blouse as she speaks. She sits and orders the girl to stand behind and massage her shoulders. Maggie moans at the touch, and after a moment slips the bra straps off her shoulders, telling the girl to reach around the front and down.* When Shyla hesitates Maggie reminds her, "You did say you'd do anything, didn't you?" Shyla sighs and reaches down to cup Maggie's breasts...

To prove my point about how much harder it is to produce multiple erotic setups vs. just one, this recycles a device I've posted here before, the first time involving a TV news exec and a young reporter angling for a weekend anchor slot!

 

*FYI, this is what I mean by "the pitch."

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Posted 9/8/2014 12:10 PM


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Aristide wrote: "The Prize: The everlasting respect and admiration of your fellow LLV forum members."

I already HAVE all of that, Aristide --- other forum members here like humble opinion, nippely, and Skyhawk ALREADY respect & admire me!

OK, seriously, I can do this --- actually, on the now-defunct Sweetheart Video forum (the section for story ideas) I must have posted over TWENTY different erotic set-up ideas, and several more on the GFF forum, as well!

The only person who ever actually USED any of my ideas was Nica Noelle, first with a Girlfriends Films release, and later at both Sweetheart Video and Girl Candy Films.

"Write 12 one-paragraph storyline descriptions that are all unique and different from each other."

1) A pretty girl wearing a skimpy, sexy-little-outfit, finds herself stranded in the middle of nowhere when her car breaks down. Fortunately for her, a predatory-lesbian-mechanic comes to her rescue, towing the girl's car back to her garage where the lezzie mechanic quickly repairs the problem. When the girl explains that she's only a college student and can't pay her any money because she's broke, the lezzie-mechanic says: "Why don't you join me in the shower where I'm sure we can work something out?" The girl smiles and begins removing her clothes.

2) Two pretty young college girls have stopped at a motel on their way to spring break somewhere down in Florida. One of them, unbeknownst to the other, is a predatory-lesbian! After ogling her beautiful friend trying on her teeny-tiny bikini, the lesbian girl suggests a game of strip poker to pass the time. Of course, the non-lesbian girl ends up LOSING, but doesn't want to strip completely nude. "OK, we'll continue to play, but if you lose one more hand you have to become my slave for the rest of the night!" And, of course, the pretty girl loses one more hand!

3) A pretty college student shows up at her female professor's office to plead for a good grade in the woman's course. The female prof, who just so happens to be a predatory-lesbian, offers to help tutor the pretty girl, telling her that she'll do it on one condition. "You have to wear something incredibly sexy during our sessions," she muses. "The less clothing, the better." The girl nods her head and smiles. "I think I can do that!"

4) A pretty girl has been pulled over by her butchy/lez-cop-neighbor, who discovers that the girl has a number of unpaid parking tickets --- "You're a scofflaw!" --- When the girl begs not to be taken to jail, the lezzie-cop licks her lips and says that "Maybe we can work something out. You need to be punished, but maybe I can do it myself. Come over to my house tonight and I'll spank that gorgeous butt of yours. I've also got some new hand-cuffs and a strap-on that I'm anxious to try out!" When the girl protests, the cop says: "Fine. Let's head to jail then." The pretty girl relents: "What time do you want me at your place?"

5) A pretty secretary travelling with her lesbian boss is admonished for dressing too frumpy. The boss offers to purchase a few new outfits for the girl, who happily accepts. One of the outfits is scandalously short & skimpy. "I can't wear this around the office," the girl exclaims. "No," her boss agrees, "that one is for tonight... I thought we'd order room service and work late... I can't wait to see how you look in it!" The girl obediently begins changing.

6) A college sorority girl needs to collect a shot-glass from a certain bar as part of her initiation, but when she goes inside the establishment she discovers that it's a tough-lesbian-BIKER-bar! Because she's so young & pretty her entrance immediately attracts the attention of the predatory-regulars. Fortunately, the pretty girl is "rescued" by the butchy-female-bartender, who actually used to BABY-SIT for the girl when she was little. The two get to talking with the bartender giving her the shot-glass that she needs, with the girl thanking her with a hug. "Remember when I was little and you used to bathe me?" "Yes, I do," the lezzie-bartender replies. "Why don't you come over tonite and I'll bathe you again?" The pretty girl blushes and asks: "What time?"

--- six down and six to go!
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Posted 9/8/2014 1:15 PM


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Aristide wrote: "To prove my point about how much harder it is to produce multiple erotic setups vs. just one, this recycles a device I've posted here before, the first time involving a TV news exec and a young reporter angling for a weekend anchor slot!"

Pretty young women applying for jobs from predatory-lesbian-bosses are ALWAYS hot!

7) A pretty girl wants a job dancing at a high-class gentlemen's club but is informed at the door that they're not currently hiring. But suddenly, the female owner of the establishment appears, takes a long look at the girl, licks her lips, and motions for the doorman to let her pass. "Why don't you come back into my office and give me an erotic lap-dance?" she exclaims, stroking the girl's hair. "You can show me just how much you want this job!" The girl smiles and allows herself to be escorted into the back.

8) A pretty young thing has violated jail rules about having contraband in her cell. The normal penalty is a week in solitary, but the head female lezzie-guard has taken a particular liking to this particular girl. "Go take a shower and then join me in my office and we'll figure out some way to expunge this violation from your record, OK?" The pretty girl nods her head and grabs her towel.

9) The Alpha Chi Omegas at State University have held their annual charity "slave auction" of freshmen girls (only WOMEN are allowed to be buyers), and pretty Jennifer discovers that the woman who has purchased her is a known very-wealthy-but-decadent-predatory-lesbian. But because the considerable amount of money raised is going to a cause dear to her heart, Jennifer agrees to act the part of an obedient slavegirl, much to the delight of her new owner! "Here's what I want you to wear," the woman orders, handing Jennifer a very skimpy white toga that covers very little of her lovely body. "I just KNOW we're going to have a LOT of fun this weekend!"

10) Jessica has committed an infraction at the exclusive private school she attends that could very possibly get her expelled. Her friend Donna informs her before her meeting with the headmistress that the woman is reputed to be a secret-lesbian. Figuring that she has nothing to lose, Jessica shows up wearing a VERY short schoolgirl skirt, and immediately begins begging the headmistress not to kick her out. "I'll do anything you want! Anything at all!" The headmistress ogles the girl's shapely legs before quietly asking: "Anything?" When the girl nods yes, the headmistress motions for her to come sit on her lap!

11) Two powerful female CEO's who are longtime rivals make a bet on monthly sales figures (or something like that), with the loser's beautiful secretary as the prize, forced to serve the winning woman at her pleasure. The exceptionally pretty girl on the losing side doesn't particularly LIKE this arrangement, but her boss insists. She arrives at the mansion of the winning CEO, and is told: "I want you nude and in my bed... NOW," with her then sharply slapping the girl on her ass as she points the way. The pretty secretary obediently hurries to obey! It's going to be a LONG night!

12) Two pretty young women meet at a Halloween party at somebody's house, one is dressed as a sexy Little Red Riding Hood while the other, a slightly butch-girl, has on what appears to be some kind of a wolf-in-grandma's-clothing outfit. After they've both been drinking for a while, the wolf-girl maneuvers Little Red into a bedroom and closes the door. "Oh grandma, what nice lips you have," the girl murmurs, as they begin making-out. "Lose the cape and everything else," the wolf-girl hisses in reply... "grandma wants to do you doggy-style," she whispers, revealing the strap-on she has on beneath her outfit. Little Red giggles in reply and begins to strip!

--- there you go --- an even DOZEN!
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Posted 9/8/2014 2:43 PM


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Pretty good, Anon, but I'll bet you've been fondling and polishing those particular fantasies for years. Now, lets see if you can crack-off another dozen totally new ones! 
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Aristide wrote: "Now, lets see if you can crack-off another dozen totally new ones!"

I think I can do it, Aristide! --- Here's four MORE:

13) A pretty girl is babysitting for a wealthy older woman who also just so happens to be a somewhat of a decadent-predatory-lesbian. The woman compliments the pretty girl on her looks before then leaving for a night out with her friends, telling the girl to help herself to any snacks she might find in the fridge. Later that evening, the girl discovers the woman's liquor cabinet, and while attempting to fix herself a rum & coke she accidentally spills it on her blouse & blue-jeans. She quickly removes them, tossing both into the washing machine, only to be discovered in this scantily-clad state when the lady-of-the-house returns home earlier than expected. The woman feigns anger over the girl getting into her liquor cabinet, with the girl apologizing profusely, but in reality the woman is highly turned-on by the sight of a pretty girl wearing only bra & panties begging her forgiveness. "I think somebody is in need of a good spanking," she says, pulling the pretty girl down over her lap...

14) (In 2009's WSW-54 from GFF there's a scene where Dana DeArmond loses a bet to Syd Blakovich on a roulette wheel --- seriously, a roulette wheel?) --- how's about a scene INSTEAD where a pretty girl is out with some friends at a blue-collar neighborhood bar, when she's challenged to a game of pool by one of the regulars, who's a butchy-lez-girl who begins flirting with her --- they play just for fun for a while, until much later, when the butchy-lez-girl makes a bet with her --- "If I sink these next three you have to come home with me" --- the pretty girl laughingly agrees, and the butchy-girl then proceeds to do exactly that! They then leave the bar together with the butch-girl's hand possessively cupping the curvy ass of her pretty-prize!

15) There's a storm outside... a woman who teaches piano lessons is about to drive her beautiful young student home after her lesson when the girl's mother calls on her cell-phone to say that the bridge between their houses has been washed away, and she asks the woman if her daughter could stay the night there, not realizing that this woman is a predatory-lesbian. Of course the woman readily agrees with this arrangement, but informs the girl that her guest room isn't prepared for visitors and so the girl will have to sleep in her bed with HER! She then offers the girl some VERY SKIMPY lingerie to wear, along with fixing her a "night-cap" of hot chocolate mixed with a generous portion of Bailey's Irish Cream! While they talk before bed she begins gently running her hands up the girl's silky-smooth thigh. "I can teach you a LOT more than simply playing the piano, Linda..."

16) A pretty young shoplifter is brought into the manager's office, where the female-manager turns out to be a close friend of the girl's mother. The girl was caught with expensive swimwear in her purse with the price-tags still attached --- she KNOWS that she's in serious trouble with everybody, including the police AND with her mother once she finds out. But the female store manager has OTHER ideas, promising to keep things quiet, and also keeping the pretty girl there until after closing time, saying she'll offer her an opportunity to EARN the bikini she stole with no repercussions. "What do I have to do?" The manager answers: "Whatever I say... and you can start by letting me see you in that tiny bikini!" The girl begins to slowly strip out of her clothes...

--- I love coming-up with these!
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Quote: Aristide wrote: " Now, lets see if you can crack-off another dozen totally new ones !" I think I can do it, Aristide! --- Here's two MORE :13) A pretty girl is babysitting for a wealthy older woma...

And the tagline, or slugline, if you prefer, for all of these would be:

Dominant predatory lesbians strike fear in the hearts - and lust in the loins - of pretty, innocent (school)girls!

Really, dude, these are all the same storyline, with only the characters and locations changed. The dialog in scene #6 seems a bit inverted. Is the bartender - who would be really hot as the unashamed and confident femme in the room - supposed to be taking the question about bathing the younger girl as a seduction invitation? Who is inviting whom?

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It'smeBooBoo wrote: "Dominant predatory lesbians strike fear in the hearts - and lust in the loins - of pretty, innocent (school)girls!"

YES!

"Really, dude, these are all the same storyline, with only the characters and locations changed."

Aristide just said they had to be DIFFERENT, Boo Boo, which all of these ARE --- they only share a similar THEME!

"The dialog in scene #6 seems a bit inverted. Is the bartender - who would be really hot as the unashamed and confident femme in the room - supposed to be taking the question about bathing the younger girl as a seduction invitation? Who is inviting whom?

It's a little bit of both, Boo Boo. The female bartender WANTS to bathe the beautiful sorority girl, and the pretty girl decides that she genuinely likes the idea, as well!

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Really, dude, these are all the same storyline, with only the characters and locations changed

Yep....all of them have been used before in one form or another.

And they all seem contrived and corny and porny.

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