"If you enjoy EVERYTHING with naked women in it, including guys watching in the background and/or girls wearing their high heels in bed, you probably won't care about the criticisms that bother me - but if you DO care about things like weak direction & lame scripts, then I can tell you a few things!"My point, as always with you Anon, is that you deliberately portray folks who don't see things your way--be they commenters or especially writers & directors--as caricatures. They are straw men that you can easily knock down with "finger-wags" such as: they must "like weak direction and lame scripts". It never occurs to you to write something like, "Since it has so often been the case, that my review of a given girl/girl movie has been the only negative one posted, it is obvious that my views and tastes are idiosyncratic and peculiar to myself. Therefore I will post my review, but refrain from labeling or attacking script writers and directors as "weak or lame", since it is clear that my views in that regard are strictly my own, and do not reflect any consensus."
You wouldn't need a feature film script to do that either. It could be done within the organizing structure of a four-scene porn film using brief scripts and many cues. And good roleplaying of course.
How much Jasmine Jae is actually attracted to Elsa Jean could be a debatable point. But that Jasmine Jae was playing a character who was attracted to Elsa Jean is NOT a debatable point. Of course Jasmine's character was attracted to Elsa. Once Elsa impulsively kisses her, Jasmine softly takes charge, holding Elsa as she kisses the girl with increasing hunger. Your problem, Anon, is that you always want to see a scene play out one way, and one way only--with the older woman dominating the younger. (In this case, you wanted to see Jasmine completely dominating Elsa), But the scene, and the sex, was much more balanced and consensual than that. That made for a much better scene, because Elsa Jean is a hotter and much more believable in her attraction for women than Jasmine Jae tends to be. For roughly the last half of this scene, or maybe more even, Elsa Jean is pretty much crawling all over Jasmine Jae's deliciously voluptuous body--and Jasmine is clearly loving the attention!